求改错

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May 16, 2019
Name : 周震
  • Gender : Male
  • Nationality/Region : Mainland China
  • Age : 20-24
  • Learning location : On the internet
  • Native language : Mandarin Chinese[S/T]
  • Learning language : Japanese
这是我写的几个日语句子,可以帮我改改其中的错误吗
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