大家好! 我是大学的学生。我希...

March 13, 2019
  • Name : héjī
  • Nationality/Region : Japan
Proofreading language : Mandarin Chinese
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大家好!
我是大学的学生。我希望能说中文。我的爱好是台球和音乐。我有时会打麻将。我刚开始学习中文。提前谢谢你。
March 14, 2019
Name : 恶之花 (Native)
大家好!
我是大学的学生。
我希望能说中文。
我的爱好是台球和音乐。
我有时会打麻将。
我刚开始学习中文。
提前谢谢你。
Corrected No problem
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March 15, 2019
Name : doraos (Native)
大家好!
我是大学的学生。
(我希望能说中文。)is not bad,but:(我希望能学会说中文)will be better
我的爱好是(play打)台球和音乐。
我有时会打麻将。
我刚开始学习中文。
提前(unnecessary)谢谢你。
Corrected No problem
infact, this article is fine and better than some local people, but if you want to face to it serious,it 's not good enough
and it's OK, every chinese will understanding your writing fluently. and you are welcome
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