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November 28, 2019
  • Name : Ai
  • Nationality/Region : Japan
Proofreading Language : English
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Hello, I'm Ai, living in Kobe.

I'm studying English, now my level is maybe intermediate, but not good at speaking.

I don't care which country my partners come from, but I just wanna talk with them in Japanese and English and have a good time:) 

Recently I study Japanese traditional culture and the spirituality. So if you are interested in such topics, let's talk about it!
Also if you have a chance to travel Kyoto, Kobe is near from Kyoto so I'm glad to travel together.

Anyway I really look for my language exchange partners.

Thank you!
December 2, 2019
Name : rss.wanan@gmail.com (Native)
Hello, I'm Ai, living in Kobe.
I'm studying English, and now my level is maybe intermediate, but I am not good at speaking.
I don't care which country my partners come from, but I just wanna talk with them in Japanese and English and have a good time:)
Recently I have been studying Japanese traditional culture and the spirituality.
So if you are interested in such topics, let's talk about ithem!
Also if you have a chance to travel to Kyoto, Kobe is near from Kyoto so I'm glad to travel together.
Anyway I really look forfind my language exchange partners.
Thank you!
Corrected No problem
1. 'travel' is a verb which has to be followed by an adverb before a noun, so we always say travel from... to... .
2. 'near' is already an adverb, which can be followed by a noun.
3. Generally, 'look for' is a phrase when we lost something and we want to search for it.

This is Alice. I am a Chinese and I used to live in the U.K.. I am learning Japanese from scratch at the moment so desperately need some help! If we could help each other, that would be lovely.
December 3, 2019
Name : TEFL(CELTA有) (Non-native)
私の母語は日本語ですが、私自身は日本人と英語ネーティブのハーフです。
よりネーティブ的な表現にしてみましたので、ご参考になさって下さい。

Hello, I'm Ai, living in Kobe.
I'm studying English and look for language exchange partners.
Perhaps my level is intermediate for the moment, and I am not good at speaking.
No matter where you come from, I just want to converse (talk) with you in Japanese and English, having fun.
Recently I began to study Japanese traditional culture and the spirituality, so we can talk about those stuff if you are interested in.
Also, if you have an opportunity to travel around Kobe, where is near Kyoto, I'm happy to show you around, .
I look forward to your message.

英語ネーティブ成りすましの不適切な助言はスルーして下さい。
・recently を使うならbegan to studyであるべきです。have been studyingは既に長い期間勉強している場合の表現です。
・travelという動詞に続くべきものは副詞ではなく前置詞です。
・look forは失くしたものを探すという意味だけに使う句動詞ではないです。友達を探している(募っている)という表現にも使えます。
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