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はじめまして、こんにちは。ハ...

2020/08/04
#0 Hansan [lQB2OAA]
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性別 / 年齢
男性 / 25-29
国(地域)籍
アメリカ
言語
広東語
英語
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日本語
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はじめまして、こんにちは。ハンサンといいます。
アメリカ人です。
オレゴン州のポートランド市に住んでいます。
両親は香港出身なので、広東語をちょっと喋ります。
東京で留学しましたけど、 日本語はまだ上手じゃないです。
私は英語を教えるので、日本語を教えてください!
よろしくお願いします。

Hi, my name is Hansan and I am from the Portland, Oregon area. My parents are from Hong Kong so we speak Cantonese at home and I can help you if you are interested in that. I have been studying Japanese for a while, but I am still bad at it haha. I used to live in Japan for work and studied abroad in Tokyo, but I don't really have a chance to use Japanese here in America so I feel like I am losing my Japanese skills. If there is anyone who wants to exchange languages then please contact me! I used to teach English in Japan so I would love to help out anyone studying English!

My hobbies are skateboarding, breakdancing, tennis, table tennis, games, food, shopping, fashion, and photography.

Feel free to send me a message if you are interested in language exchange or just being friends and sharing hobbies! I can communicate through LINE, Discord, or Skype! I wouldn't mind face to face meetings if you are in the Portland area either!
#1 ALT [JYQHIxE]
(非母語話者)
はじめまして、こんにちは。
ハンサンといいます。
アメリカ人です。
オレゴン州のポートランド市に住んでいます。
両親は香港出身なので、広東語をちょっと喋ります。
東京で留学しましたけど、 日本語はまだ上手じゃないです。
私は英語を教えるので、日本語を教えてください!
よろしくお願いします。
Hi, my name is Hansan and, I am from the Portland, Oregon area(state).
MSince my parents are from Hong Kong so we, I speak Cantonese at home and, so I can help you with it also (in addtion to English) if you are interested in that.
I have been studying Japanese for a while, but I am still bad at it, haha.
I used to live in Japan for working and studied abroad in Tokyo, but I don't really have a chance to use Japanese here in America so I feel like I am losing my Japanese skills.
If there is anyone who wants to exchange languages then please contact me!
I used to teach English in Japan so I would love to help out anyone studying English!
My hobbies are skateboarding, breakdancing, tennis, table tennis, games, food, shopping, fashion, and photography.
Feel free to send me a message if you are interested in language exchange or being friends and sharing hobbies (even just being friends andor sharing hobbies are fine)!
I can communicate through LINE, Discord, or Skype!
I wouldn't mind face to face meetings if you are in the Portland area eitheras well!
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2020/08/04
#2 れぎゅれーたー [V1kQVgA]
(母語話者)
はじめまして、こんにちは
ハンサンといいます。
アメリカ人です。
オレゴン州のポートランド市に住んでいます。
両親は香港出身なので、広東語をちょっと喋ます。
東京で留学しましたけど、 日本語はまだ上手じゃないです。
英語を教えるので、代わりに日本語を教えてください!
よろしくお願いします。
Hi, my name is Hansan and I am from the Portland, Oregon area.
My parents are from Hong Kong so we speak Cantonese at home and I can help you if you are interested in that.
I have been studying Japanese for a while, but I am still bad at it haha.
I used to live in Japan for work and studied abroad in Tokyo, but I don't really have a chance to use Japanese here in America so I feel like I am losing my Japanese skills.
If there is anyone who wants to exchange languages then please contact me!
I used to teach English in Japan so I would love to help out anyone studying English!
My hobbies are skateboarding, breakdancing, tennis, table tennis, games, food, shopping, fashion, and photography.
Feel free to send me a message if you are interested in language exchange or just being friends and sharing hobbies!
I can communicate through LINE, Discord, or Skype!
I wouldn't mind face to face meetings if you are in the Portland area either!
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2020/08/16
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