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Hi, I'm yasu. I'm learning En...

2021/04/11
#0 yasu [ElFUAhI]
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性別 / 年齢
男性 / 35-39
国(地域)籍
日本
言語
日本語
添削対象言語
英語
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Hi, I'm yasu.
I'm learning English and want to make friends with people from overseas.

Would you like to do language exchange?
It would be great if we could casually exchange messages whenever we feel like it.

I'm not good at speaking, so I want to start with messages. XD.

Thanks! Don't hesitate to send me messages.
#1 [MiiQZAQ]
(非母語話者)
Hi, I'm yasu.
I'm learning English and I want to make friends with people from overseas.overseas friends
Would you like to dohave language exchange?
It would be great if we could text casually exchange messages (whenever we feel like it.)<-- sorry i don't get what you mean xd
I'm not good at speaking, so I want to start with texting messages.
XD.
Thanks!
Don't hesitate to send me messages.
訂正済 訂正不要
make overseas/international/foreign friends
make friends abroad
make friends from all over the world

Hi, yasu san! I am a native Cantonese speaker from Hong Kong and I'm learning japanese right now.
If you don't mind that i'm not a native english speaker, let's be friend! I will try my best to help!
2021/04/15
#2 [MiiQZAQ]
(非母語話者)
oops, there's a typo.

the last sentence--
i want to start with texting OR i want to start with sending messages
the above are better
2021/04/15
#3 kiki [ImkniII]
(非母語話者)
make friends with sb is IDM (idiom/熟語)
the original statement is grammatically correct.
2021/04/18
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