外语文章校正

I'm Japanese. I currently lea...

2019/10/02
#0 Toy [JYQZmSg]
Profile
性别 / 年龄
男 / 25-29
国(地区)籍
日本
语言
日语
校正语言
英语
校正内容
I'm Japanese. I currently learning English. (beginner level)
I will also help you learn Japanese do my best.
I like people who don't laugh at strange English.
#1 ling [N5mRJCA]
(非母语者)
I'm Japanese.
I currently learn'm practicing English. now,
(beginner level) yet.
I will alsocan help you learn Japanese do my best.to practice Japanese if you want. I swear to do my best for you. lol
I like pehople whoyou don't laugh at strange Englishmy beginner's English.  I never laugh at your Japanese of course.
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2019/10/02
#2 Shaoming [ITB0BgQ]
(非母语者)
I'm Japanese.
I am currently learning English.
(beginner level)
I will also help you to learn Japanese and do my best.
I like people who don't laugh at strangemy poor English.
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Hey Toy,
you did a good job! I just made a few small corrections above so congratulate you :). This a fairly acceptable piece of work from a beginner, but If I were you, I will rewrite them into following sentences:

I am Japanese who is currently learning English at very early stage. I like to have someone to practice English. In return I will help you with Japanese. I will do my best and prefer people who are nice and never tease me about my poor English.

Thanks
2019/10/05
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