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2022/07/15

#0 星降之夜 [Z1hSZYA]

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Today, we asked students in Class 3 Grade 7 how they go to school. Here is the result. In this survey, we put forward four ways to go to school, and surveyed a total of 50 students. Among them,15 students go to school by bus,10 students walk to school, twenty students go to school by bike, accounting for forty percent. Five students come to school by subway or car, two by subway and three by car.
Through this survey, we found that more students choose a healthy way to go to school. I suggest that more students can choose a better way to go to school like them.

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#1 江左梅郎 [MFRWeUA]

Today, we asked students in Class 3 Grade 7 how they go to school.

Here is the result.

In this survey, we put forward four ways to go to school, and surveyed a total of 50 students.

Among them,15 students go to school by bus,10 students walk to school, twenty. 20 students go to school by bike, accounting for forty percent.

Five students come to school by subway or car, two by subway and three by car.

Through this survey, we found that more students choose a healthy and environmental-friendly  way to go to school.

I suggest that more students canshould choose a better way to go to school like them.

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