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This year’s Kanji

2022/12/12
#0 Kaoru [JDkmQBU]
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女性 / 30-34
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日本語
英語
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英語の勉強をしています。もっと上手に話せるようになりたいです!
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I'm studing English and I want to speak much better than now.
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2022/09/28 更新
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英語
添削内容
Today this year’s Kanji was presented and it’s ‘war’. There are many war or danger of war surround us is the reason why it’s selected. For me, this year’s Kanji is ‘wave’. We had many wave of COVID-19 and there are many changing wave around the world. So I select this Kanji. Anyway, both of the selected and my selected are not good meaning for us. I hope next year’s Kanji is better meaning.
#1 UCCU [QUNGJUQ]
Today, this year’s Kanji was presented and it’s e word of the 2022 is declared--‘war’.
There are many wasr or danger of war surround using is the reason why it’s selected.
For me, this year’s Kanji is ‘wave’.
We had many waves of COVID-19 and there are still many changing wave around(chellenging ?) waves in the world.
So, I select this Kanji.
Anyway, both of the selected and my selected are notwords and mine don't have the good meaning for us.
I hope next year’s Kanji is better meaning., we will have the better word of the year!
訂正済 訂正不要
2022/12/14
#2 Kaoru [JDkmQBU]
Thank you for helping me!
2022/12/16
#3 Julia [EAFQJiQ]
Today this year’s Kanji was presented and it’s ‘war’.
There are many wars or danger of war surround us which is the reason why it’s selected.
For me, this year’s Kanji is ‘wave’.
We had many waves of COVID-19 and there are many changing wave around the world.
So I selected this Kanji.
Anyway, both of the selected and my selected areKanji finally were selected even though my Kanji is not a good meaning for us.
I hope next year’s Kanji is betterthe Kanji selected next year will have a good meaning.
訂正済 訂正不要
2023/04/05
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