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2018/01/22
#0 ats [KEOHKVc]
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はじめまして!

本業は大学院生ですが、非常勤講師もしています。

横浜の中心部に住んでいます。

地理と語学(英語、フランス語)が好きです。旅行も好きですが、海外経験は多くないです。

性格はマイペースで慎重、倹約家です。また、収集癖があります(記念硬貨など)。また、スポーツは特にしないのですが、今から頂点を目指せる競技があったら本気で取り組みたいですね(笑)自分の世界を広げたいです!
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Hi, Nice to meet you☺

I'm a graduate student and a part-time teacher.
I live in central Yokohama.

I like foreign language (English and French) and geography.
Ialso like traveling, but I have traveled overseas just several times.

I am easygoing, prudent, and frugal.
I have the habit of collecting commemorative coins, etc.

I don't play any sports, but I want to try one, if I can achieve the top even from now haha!
I want to broaden my world!
#1 [NogodXY]
(非母語者)
Sorrynobody has corrected your English so far, but actually your English very good and nobody has better English ability than you^^
2018/01/24
#2 Jen.L [YFaZh5A]
(母語者)
Hi, Nnice to meet you☺
I'm a graduate student and apart-time teacher.
I live in central Yokohama.
I like foreign languages (English and French) and geography.
I also like traveling, but I have only traveled overseas just several times.
I am easygoing, prudent, and frugal. (This sentence is grammatically correct, but we rarely use "prudent" to describe a personality. More common options are: cautious, careful, sensible etc. )
I have the habit of collecting commemorative coins, etc.
I don't play any sports, but I want to try one, if I can achieve the top even from now haha!
I want to broaden my whorldizon!
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Hi, I hope this it helpful. Ihardly found any grammatical errors, only a few word choices that could be improved. In order to write better you can also experiment with more variation in sentencestructure :D
2018/01/25
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