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2018/04/22
#0 neko [JogDKXk]
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Summer is coming ,the sweltering weather made me very uncomfortable ,so I took a shower in the afternoon,it made me feel better.
Recently,Ioften became unfocused.I was not participating in lessons.I don't like taking classes,I perfer to learn by myself ,though it is not efficient.
I don't like my teachers' teaching styles ,their classes are boring ,they often take much time to express one point clearly(他们通常要花很多时间才能解释清楚一个要点).
I'm looking forward to meeting a teacher who is wisdom,who can come up with some new iders,who can open thre door to a new world for his students .
#1 [NIEEBzQ]
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Summer is coming ,the sweltering weather made me very uncomfortable , humidity makes me feel unpleasant, so I tookhad a shower in thethis afternoon,it made me feel better I am refreshed now.
Recently,I often became unfocused.I was not participating in lessonI have been unfocused recently, I have not attended my classes. I don't like taking classes,hem, I perfer to learn by myself , though it is not efficient.
I don't like my teachers' teaching styles ,their classemethod, their lessons are boring , they often take too much time to expressfucus on cleafying just one point clearly(他们通常要花很多时间才能解释清楚一个要点).
I'm looking forward hope to meeting a teacher who isith wisdom, who canis capable to come up with some new iders,who c and open thre door to  a new world for his/her students .
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