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Today’s topic : Y2K

2022/12/08
#0 Kaoru [IUFYdlc]
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2022/09/28 更新
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I like young people words, they always heard or seem weird but they make me fun. One of this year’s popular young people word is “Y2K”. It means “Year 2000 (two kilos)”. I wander who made this word. Anyway, these days young people find attractive the old days things, and focus on 2000s is Y2K. In that time, Amuro Namie, Hamasaki Ayumi or Morning Musume… there are many celebrates with specific fashioned style, like the long boots with thick shoe sole, Garu, rude socks, which are the socks with rude looks, and so on. They think it’s emotional or Kawaii because there are no fashions like these in these days. My mom said era always repeat again and again, but it’s not all the same. This time’s Y2K is also not as same as in that era. The younger just fun that kind of fashion after school or weekend, not usual school days. Now people all around the word can see the trend in any country. I want to know what is foreign younger’s trends. I herd many foreigners are interested in 70’s J-POP. But how about another things? If you know something what younger generations are interested in, please tell me!
#1 UCCU [gkUJQBA]
I like young people words, tth language. They always heard or seemlook like weird but they make me funare fun for me.
One of this year’s popular young people wordpopular words in youth language this year is “Y2K”.
It means “Year 2000 (two kilosthousand)”.
I waonder who madecreated this word.
Anyway, these days young people find attractive, the youth find the old days things are attractive, and focus on 2000s which is Y2K.
In that time, Amuro Namie, Hamasaki Ayumi or Morning Musume…
there are many celebraties with specific fashioned style, like the long boots with thick shoe sole, Garu, rude socks, which are the socks with rude looks, and so on.
They youth think it’sthe old fashions are emotional or Kawaii because there are no fashions like these in these dayn't similar to current fashions.
My mom said era always repeat again and again, but it’s not(how about "era is a circle"?) but it isn't the same all the satime.
This time’s, Y2K is also not as same as in that era.
The younger just fun that kind of fashion after school or weekend, not usual school days.
Now, people all aroundin the world can see theis trend in any country.
I want to know what isthe youth's trends are in foreign ycounger’s trends.tries?
I herd many foreigners are interested in 70’s J-POP.
But how about another things?
If you know something what younger generations are interested in, please tell me!
訂正済 訂正不要
it's my first time to help other's correction, and these corrections are fixed according to my thinking.
If there are any mistake, please forgive me
2022/12/09
#2 Kaoru [IUFYdlc]
Thank you for your correction! I'd like to write more simple, so your correction is very nice for me^^
2022/12/11
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