外语文章校正
Daiary
2022/09/29
#0
Kaoru
[QJZ4UGE]
Profile
性别 / 年龄
女
/ 30-34
家乡
日本
语言
日语
英语
中文(普通话)
英语
中文(普通话)
英語の勉強をしています。もっと上手に話せるようになりたいです！
料理、音楽、映画、文化などなど、気軽にお話ししたいです～！
I'm studing English and I want to speak much better than now.
I'm interested in cooking, music, movies, culture...and more.
If you want to talk in English or Japanese, please contact me^^
料理、音楽、映画、文化などなど、気軽にお話ししたいです～！
I'm studing English and I want to speak much better than now.
I'm interested in cooking, music, movies, culture...and more.
If you want to talk in English or Japanese, please contact me^^
2022/09/28 更新
校正语言
英语
校正内容
Today I took 2nd grade bookkeeping test.I've studied hard in these two months, and finally I passed the test!
I'm very happy and proud of me.
Now I have rest work because I worked too much and also I want to think about next challenge.
I sometime bit nourvous that I don't have any job right now, and I don't know I can get a job after a half year.
But I have lisence of 2nd grade bookkeeping now, so maybe it's OK.
Thinking negative is very easey for me, so I will try to think positive and positive.
To be positive, excercising is one of a good thing to do.
So go for walk with litter fast walking in this beautiful autum season, and get to be a positive person...may be.
#1
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I sometime bit nourvous that I don't have any job right now, and I don't know whether I can get a job after a half year.
But I have the lisence of 2nd grade bookkeeping now, so maybe it's OK.
Thinking negative is very easey for me, so I will try to think positively and positively.
To be positive, excercising is one ofagood things to do.
So go for walk with littlerfast walking in this beautiful autumn season, andget tobe a positive person...
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2022/10/05
#2
尾上→Σ(ﾟДﾟ)→
[RBkgdAA]
By the way, the title may be wrong, do u want to write "diary"?
2022/10/05
#3
Kaoru
[QJZ4UGE]
Thank you for your checking and correcting.
Ah, yes the title is misspeling...
Ah, yes the title is misspeling...
2022/10/05
#4
魚なな
[J3glOAM]
Today I took my/the 2nd grade bookkeeping test.
I'm very happy and proud of meyself.
Now I have rest(retired is better:D) work because I worked too much and also I want to think about the next challenge.
I sometime feel bit nourvous that I don't have any jobs right now, and I don't know if I can get a job after a half year.
Thinking negatively is very easey for me, so I will try to thinkpositive andmore positively.
So go for a walk with littlerfastwalkingspeed in this beautiful autum season, andget tobe a positive person...
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2022/11/21