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Daiary

29 Sep 2022 (UTC)

#0 Kaoru [QJZ4UGE]

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Female / 30-34

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英語の勉強をしています。もっと上手に話せるようになりたいです！
料理、音楽、映画、文化などなど、気軽にお話ししたいです～！

I'm studing English and I want to speak much better than now.
I'm interested in cooking, music, movies, culture...and more.
If you want to talk in English or Japanese, please contact me^^

Last updated 28 Sep 2022 (UTC)

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Today I took 2nd grade bookkeeping test.
I've studied hard in these two months, and finally I passed the test!
I'm very happy and proud of me.
Now I have rest work because I worked too much and also I want to think about next challenge.
I sometime bit nourvous that I don't have any job right now, and I don't know I can get a job after a half year.
But I have lisence of 2nd grade bookkeeping now, so maybe it's OK.
Thinking negative is very easey for me, so I will try to think positive and positive.
To be positive, excercising is one of a good thing to do.
So go for walk with litter fast walking in this beautiful autum season, and get to be a positive person...may be.

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#1 尾上→Σ(ﾟДﾟ)→ [RBkgdAA]

Today I took 2nd grade bookkeeping test.

I've studied hard in these two months, and finally I passed the test!

I'm very happy and proud of me.

Now I have rest work because I worked too much and also I want to think about next challenge.

I sometime bit nourvous that I don't have any job right now, and I don't know whether I can get a job after a half year.

But I have the lisence of 2nd grade bookkeeping now, so maybe it's OK.

Thinking negative is very easey for me, so I will try to think positively and positively.

To be positive, excercising is one of a good things to do.

So go for walk with littler fast walking in this beautiful autumn season, and get to be a positive person...

may be.

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I am Chinese, I think there are some wrongs in the article. Maybe I am wrong.

05 Oct 2022 (UTC)

#2 尾上→Σ(ﾟДﾟ)→ [RBkgdAA]

By the way, the title may be wrong, do u want to write "diary"?

05 Oct 2022 (UTC)

#3 Kaoru [QJZ4UGE]

Thank you for your checking and correcting.
Ah, yes the title is misspeling...

05 Oct 2022 (UTC)

#4 魚なな [J3glOAM]

Today I took my/the 2nd grade bookkeeping test.

I've studied hard in these two months, and finally I passed the test!

I'm very happy and proud of meyself.

Now I have rest(retired is better:D) work because I worked too much and also I want to think about the next challenge.

I sometime feel bit nourvous that I don't have any jobs right now, and I don't know if I can get a job after a half year.

But I have lisence of 2nd grade bookkeeping now, so maybe it's OK.

Thinking negatively is very easey for me, so I will try to think positive andmore positively.

To be positive, excercising is one of a good thing to do.

So go for a walk with littler fast walkingspeed in this beautiful autum season, and get to be a positive person...

may be.

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I just try to rectify your diary and make it seem to be more smooth from where i stand. :D Fighting!

21 Nov 2022 (UTC)