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Daiary

2022/09/29
#0 Kaoru [QJZ4UGE]
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性別 / 年齡
女 / 30-34
家鄉
日本
語言
日語
英語
中文(國語/普通話)
英語の勉強をしています。もっと上手に話せるようになりたいです!
料理、音楽、映画、文化などなど、気軽にお話ししたいです~!

I'm studing English and I want to speak much better than now.
I'm interested in cooking, music, movies, culture...and more.
If you want to talk in English or Japanese, please contact me^^
2022/09/28 更新
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英語
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Today I took 2nd grade bookkeeping test.
I've studied hard in these two months, and finally I passed the test!
I'm very happy and proud of me.
Now I have rest work because I worked too much and also I want to think about next challenge.
I sometime bit nourvous that I don't have any job right now, and I don't know I can get a job after a half year.
But I have lisence of 2nd grade bookkeeping now, so maybe it's OK.
Thinking negative is very easey for me, so I will try to think positive and positive.
To be positive, excercising is one of a good thing to do.
So go for walk with litter fast walking in this beautiful autum season, and get to be a positive person...may be.
#1 尾上→Σ(゚Д゚)→ [RBkgdAA]
Today I took 2nd grade bookkeeping test.
I've studied hard in these two months, and finally I passed the test!
I'm very happy and proud of me.
Now I have rest work because I worked too much and also I want to think about next challenge.
I sometime bit nourvous that I don't have any job right now, and I don't know whether I can get a job after a half year.
But I have the lisence of 2nd grade bookkeeping now, so maybe it's OK.
Thinking negative is very easey for me, so I will try to think positively and positively.
To be positive, excercising is one of a good things to do.
So go for walk with littler fast walking in this beautiful autumn season, and get to be a positive person...
may be.
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I am Chinese, I think there are some wrongs in the article. Maybe I am wrong.
2022/10/05
#2 尾上→Σ(゚Д゚)→ [RBkgdAA]
By the way, the title may be wrong, do u want to write "diary"?
2022/10/05
#3 Kaoru [QJZ4UGE]
Thank you for your checking and correcting.
Ah, yes the title is misspeling...
2022/10/05
#4 魚なな [J3glOAM]
Today I took my/the 2nd grade bookkeeping test.
I've studied hard in these two months, and finally I passed the test!
I'm very happy and proud of meyself.
Now I have rest(retired is better:D) work because I worked too much and also I want to think about the next challenge.
I sometime feel bit nourvous that I don't have any jobs right now, and I don't know if I can get a job after a half year.
But I have lisence of 2nd grade bookkeeping now, so maybe it's OK.
Thinking negatively is very easey for me, so I will try to think positive andmore positively.
To be positive, excercising is one of a good thing to do.
So go for a walk with littler fast walkingspeed in this beautiful autum season, and get to be a positive person...
may be.
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I just try to rectify your diary and make it seem to be more smooth from where i stand. :D Fighting!
2022/11/21
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